On another note... I just noticed how fail I am at continuing stories, so I've got and idea...
first I'll just start with a story outline before the real deal =D
All learned from english.
First we need the introduction, then rising action, then the climax, then the falling action and then end.
Introduction:
Boy named Selix
The world of the protagonist is underwater
The land is ruled by an organization called the Oneiroi
Rising Action
There have been constant cracks in the glass in the cities around the world
The above information is classified, the public does not know about "Land" or the cracks
Selix finds out because his dad works for the government secret service
In his own city, he sees cracks in the glass and he tries to escape and use a submarine to surface and find "Land"
He almost dies trying to get up and he falls unconscious after the first glimpse of "Land"
Wakes up tied to metal posts in a cell.
Finds out someone saved him and they say he was attacked by a Krod which is an creature that eats at your bones without touching you and without penetrating your skin.
They replace his bones with silver replicates and they have special gears for his joints.
They added a pair of matching silver guns that are chained to his silver shoulder-blades.
finish it tomorrow =D
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